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中文优美的英文句子结构

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一、实习目的:

为了使自己更加深入了解英语在社会和实际工作中的应用,丰富已学过的专业课内容,培养理论联系实际的能力,提高在语言应用中分析问题及解决问题的实际能力。为了更好地为完成毕业论文打下基础,为了以后工作的顺利进行。通过实习,还应了解英语在外贸,及涉外和服务行业中的重要地位,了解和积累更多的实践经验,培养热爱专业,献身国家建设的思想。我们使用相关专业课教材,及实习单位提供的相关材料通过参与一个完整的笔译过程(资料,情报翻译)或口译过程(涉外接待,贸易谈判等),使自己掌握和提高熟练使用英语的技能。

翻译单位是本市唯一的一家经工商局审批注册的专为国内外各机构和个人提供专业翻译服务的企业。拥有各行业的专业翻译人员、高级审译顾问、外籍专家、审译人员、留学回国人员等组成的优秀工作团队。本单位坚持“以人为本”的指导思想,本着“团结拼搏,勇创一流”的精神,恪守“追求卓越挑战极限”的原则,积极为焦作地区的经济、文化和对外交流与发展,作出我们应有的贡献。单位长期对外承接的翻译服务有:英、日、法、俄、德、韩、蒙、越南、阿拉伯、西班牙、意大利,等近40种语种与汉语不同形式的笔译,陪同口译,交替传译,同声传译等业务。涉及机械、化工、汽车、金融、文学等各个领域。我们实行的是“翻译—副译审—总译审”的三级质量管理体系。合理的翻译运作流程、严格的质量控制体系、独特的翻译员审核标准以及完善的跟踪回访服务是我们优质翻译的保证。我们始终信守诚实做人,踏实做事的原则。秉承“竭诚为客户服务”的宗旨,用我们的辛勤工作换来沟通无限和您的微笑。

二、翻译过程的基本环节与具体要求

(一)实际翻译程序可以归纳如下:

1、快速翻译,侧重文体。有些译者认为口述的译文更新颖、更流畅。但无论译者是口述、打字、还是手写,重要的是要使译文节奏流畅;

2、初稿应该保留约一周左右。这样,修订译稿时就可以获得全新的感受,排除翻译初稿时留在耳边的余音,更加客观地评估译文;

3、认真检查译文内容,特别着重译文的准确性和连贯性。删除不必要的增补词语和补充初稿中的疏漏。特别要注意关键概念在翻译上的一致性,理顺拗口的词句;

4、从文体上检查译文。其实,这一步骤应该反复进行多次。朗读译文是一个非常重要的办法,因为听觉对连贯性和节奏感方面的问题比视觉要敏锐得多;

5、检查译文拼写、标点符号和格式。有些译者错误地认为,对译文内容、文体和正字法这三方面的检查可以合并起来一次完成,这种看法是大错特错的。对译文上述三个方面的检查应该分别进行;

6、译文送交三审审阅。

(二)汉译英的具体要求:

1、符合写作的一切规则

a)格式要求

i、拼写正确

ii、标点正确(英语中不用汉语标点:英语无顿号、逗号是圆点,所有符号语汉语大小不同;逗号后面有空格,前面没有;英语标点和汉语没有必然对应关系)

b)语法要求

i、注意每个名词的单复数是否正确

ii、注意时态是否正确

iii、人称和数是否照应

c)词和句子的要求

i、每个单词的意思准确、符合上下文需要

ii、每个单词的搭配符合英语习惯

iii、每个动词的句型符合英语习惯

iv、每个介词的.用法符合英语习惯

翻译的三个基本要求是“信”、“达”、“雅”。“信”要求忠实原文的内容和每个句子的含义,用现代汉语字字落实、句句落实直译出来,不得随意地增减内容。“达”要求翻译出的现代文要表意明确、语言通顺、语气不走样。“雅”要求用简明、优美、富有文采的现代汉语把原文的内容、形式及风格准确地表达出来。

(三)在翻译中遇到的困难及其分析:

基于翻译的具体要求,我还不能完全达到这种水平,虽然可以句句落实直译出来,做到不随意增减内容,但却做不到“达”的要求,翻译出的材料表意不明确,译不出原材料的那种语气,“雅”的要求更是离的太远,还有涉及到专业性的材料就会觉得一头雾水,不知从何下手,此翻彼翻都觉得不太贴切。

在中国青年报上看到这样一则消息:把“保税仓库”译为“保证税收的仓库”,“五四运动”成了“五四体育运动”……译文中国人看不懂外国人不明白“一个英语专业8级的大学毕业生,语法结构错误百出,认为‘小康’就是‘富有’,译文做成中英文字符的简单对应……”说起前两天来应聘翻译职位的一位大学毕业生的表现,北京一家翻译单位的负责人直摇头。其实,考试的题目并不是很难——一段关于“我国实行按劳分配制度,允许和支持一部分人通过诚实劳动先富起来”的100字左右的中译英试题。这家翻译单位的负责人说,像这样拿着英语专业8级证书,却当不了合格翻译的大学毕业生,并非极端个别的例子。现在合格的翻译太少了。

伴随着中国加入世贸组织,对外交流的日益频繁,翻译人才的缺口越来越大。业内专家表示,翻译市场巨大,合格翻译人才紧缺,学了外语就能当翻译的老观念该改一改了。

这则消息正说明了一个现实问题,我深有体会,我们在工作中翻译用词不准确,专业领域背景知识缺乏,写作水平又差,真觉得不能胜任翻译工作。把“数控发电机”译成“数字化发电机”,把“保税仓库”译为“保证税收的仓库”,这样的例子比比皆是。由于历史背景和专有名词的缺乏,单纯从字面意思出发,把“五四运动”中的“运动”直译为“Sport”(即体育运动),这样的笑话也出了不少。由于自己的中文基础不扎实,词汇变化少,语言贫乏,翻译出来的东西语言不通顺。外语的学习则是从认知语言学起,我们掌握了大量的词汇、语法后,再串成句子连成段落。老师在讲述外语的过程中不可能一篇文章或一段话地讲解,学习效果很不地道。学完外语专业只能表示具备翻译行为,而并不具备职业翻译能力。换句话说,学完外语专业不是就能做翻译了。本科生在大学学习阶段,大多没有接触过系统的翻译课程训练,即使有翻译课程也是在大三下学期或大四才开课。没有平时的训练怎么能成为合格的翻译呢?由于高等教育的日益普及,本科教育已不是终端教育。学生在本科阶段主要打好语言基础,在研究生阶段进行集中翻译学习培训。专家普遍认为,要成为一名合格的翻译,需要在本科毕业后,用2至3年进行专门的翻译课程学习,在工作中磨练若干年,并学习相关的专业知识和术语等。

三、那么在以后的学习和工作中怎样才能做一名合格翻译呢,具体有一下几点需要注意:

1、扎实的语言基本功。一名优秀的翻译员应具备良好的英语修养和扎实的汉语基本功,掌握英汉两种语言的特点和互译规律,拥有快速、准确地遣词造句的能力。翻译员要有良好的语音基本功,掌握英汉两种语言基础,敏锐的听力,超常的词汇量,良好的语感,灵活的表达能力以及广阔语言文化背景知识。需要特别强调的是翻译员的听力理解能力,他是口译成败的一个关键因素,也是一名翻译员的综合语言和知识水平的反映。

2、广博的知识面。翻译员光有扎实的语言基本功是远远不够的。常常有翻译员因缺乏主题知识或百科知识而出现“卡壳”的现象。翻译员的接触面很广,接待的对象在职业、年龄、身份、阶层、志趣、爱好、生活习惯、民族性格、社会习俗、宗教信仰等方面都会有很大的差异,随时随地都有可能遇到各种话题。因此,翻译员必须掌握丰富全面的百科知识,例如专业常识、社会常识、法规政策常识、国际常识以及背景知识、国情地情、风土人情、名胜古迹、花草树木、昆虫动物等百科知识,拥有较高的文化修养,能上知天文、下通地理、博古通今,并熟悉各行各业,努力做一个“杂家”或“万事通”。

3、出众的记忆力。翻译员需要有非凡的记忆力,这一点是由口译工作的特点所决定的。首先,翻译员在口译过程中不可能有机会查阅词典和工具书,或请教别人,因此,翻译员必须记住大量的词汇(包括专业词汇)、成语、典故和缩略词等。其次,翻译员要把讲话人所讲的内容准确详尽地用另一种语言表达出来,也必须有相当好的记忆力。

4、口齿要清楚。

5、严谨的工作作风。

6、良好的心理素质。

四、实习收获及总结:

经过为期两个月的实习,我学到很多东西知道了翻译的具体过程和基本要求,了解到自己不足的地方,清楚了自己应向哪个方面努力。在实习期间从事大量中英文文字翻译,例如各种出国证明书(出生证明,亲属证明,成绩单等),合同,财务报表,单位章程及法律文件。以后,我在学习上应理论联系实际,从点到面的全面学习,避免拿以前应付考试的态度来学习;在工作中应该实事求是,细心认真的独立完成自己的工作,并要培养与人协作的精神;在生活中就我个人而言应学会更好的与人相处和沟通,即将离开学校走入社会,我必须更好的完善自己的性格。

篇一:翻译句子练习

一、补充完整句子。

1·在人民广场地下建造一个交通中心是个绝妙的主意。

It is a wonderful idea _________________________ under the People' s Square.

2·我们不能只是在教师节时才想到要尊敬教师。

We can't think of ____________ only on Teachers' Day.

3·他所钦佩的人不是歌手或演员,而是献身于科学的科学家。(not…but) The people _______________________are ____________________________the scientists who are devoted to science.

4·直到他长大成人才真正体会到父亲对他的爱。

Only when he ___________ did he really realize his father's love for him.

5·说起中国足球,大多数球迷是又爱又恨。(talk of)

________________the football of China, most of the football fans love and hate it.

6·一个人不可能一辈子不犯错误,但要尽量少犯错误。(as…as possible) It is impossible for a person____________________________, but he should make ________________________________.

7·他觉得给别人带来幸福的人才是世界上最幸福的人。(bring)

He thinks (that) the people ____________________are the happiest __________ in the world.

8·使我惊讶的是,在北欧地区几乎每个人都会一、两种外语。(amazement) _______________________, nearly everybody ____________________can speak one or two foreign languages.

9·每当他听到这首歌曲,就会想起家乡的一草一木。(occur)

Every time he hears this song, almost everything ______________ will ________to him.

10·一样东西只有当你失去时,才会觉得它是多么重要。(until)

You ___________ find something important until you have lost it.

11·中国政府决定向艾滋病患者免费提供药品。(suffer)

The Chinese government has decided to____________________________ to those who are suffering from AIDS.

12·任何生产像劣质奶粉这样害人的产品的人必须受到法律的惩罚。(produce) Anyone who (has) produced such harmful products as milk powder of poor quality ____________________________.

13·我怀疑世界上究竟有没有使人聪明的药。(on earth)

I doubt ___________on earth there is any medicine that makes people clever in the world.

14·很难估计伊拉克战争将持续多久。(estimate)

____________________________how long the Iraq War will last.

15·石油价格的飞速上涨对世界经济产生了很大的影响。(affect)

____________________________________________ has greatly affected the world economy.

16·你觉得年轻人借钱买汽车是否明智? (sensible)

Do you find/ think ______________sensible for young people to borrow money to buy cars?

17·我非常敬佩那些为祖国争光的残疾运动员。

I _______________ the disabled athletes who (have) won honour for our country.

18·只要恐怖主义存在一天,世界就不会安宁。(exist)

_______________terrorism exists, there will be ________________in the world.

19·使我非常气愤的是,有些老板经常强迫农民工日夜干活。(make)

To my great anger, some bosses often make the workers from the countryside________________________.

20·如果人人想当白领,今后谁来干体力活? (do)

Who will ____________________ from now on if everybody wants to be a white-collar worker?

二、翻译句子

21·我认为数码相机总有一天会替代传统相机。(substitute)

22·二十年前没人能预料到上海的家庭会普及空调。(popular)

23·越来越多的人希望在假期里亲近大自然。(be close to)

24·如今许多小卫星是以那些为社会作出杰出贡献的人命名的。(name after)

25·有些年轻人整天在社会上闲逛已成为严重的社会问题。(wander)

26·那位老科学家呼吁政府采取措施来保护那座古镇。(appeal)

27·韩国政府鼓励人们购买本国公司生产的汽车和家用电器。(encourage)

28·我们决不能忘记日本侵略者在二战中给中国人民带来的灾难。(Never)

29·使我惊讶的是那台六十年前生产的机器还在这家工厂使用。(in use)

30·每一位消费者应该懂得如何保护自己的合法权益。(how to)

31·每天摄人太多的盐和糖会损害人体的健康。(be harmful)

32·在患了重病后,他的爷爷才下决心戒烟。(Only)

33·饭店越开越多的原因是许多人劳累一天后不愿意自己做饭。(exist)

34·老人们最需要的是自己的孩子多关心他们。(show concern to)

35·除了课本,学生应该在业余时间多看各类书籍。(variety)

36·你是否觉得电视已成为人们日常生活中必不可少的一部分? (essential)

37·据估计明年夏天中国许多地区将严重缺电。(It)

38·显而易见,越来越多的美国人开始担心自己的安全。(worry about)

39·广州人一般很难适应北方气候,尤其是冬天。(adapt)

40·那位白发苍苍的老爷爷脸上的皱纹表明他一辈子饱经风霜。(show)

21. I think there will be a day when digital cameras will substitute for traditional ones.

( Or: I think digital cameras will substitute for traditional ones one day.)

22. Twenty years ago, nobody could expect that air-conditioners would be popular with the families in Shanghai.

23. More and more people hope to be close to nature during the holidays.

24. Nowadays many small satellites are named after the people who have made outstanding contributions to the society.

25. That some young people are wandering in the society all day has become a serious social problem.

26. The old scientist appealed that the government should take measures to protect that old town.

27. The South Korean government encourages people to buy the cars and domestic appliances produced by native companies.

28. Never can we forget the disasters which Japanese invader brought to the Chinese people during the Second World War.

29. To my surprise, the machine which was made sixty years ago is still in use in this factory.

30. Every consumer should know how to protect his own legal rights.

31. It is harmful to people's health to take in too much salt and sugar every day.

(Or: If you take in too much salt and sugar every day, it is harmful to your health.)

32. Only after he (had) suffered from a serious disease did his grandfather make up his mind to give up smoking.

33. The reason why more and more restaurants exist is that many people won't / are not willing to do cooking by themselves after a day's hard work.

34. What the old need most is that their children show much concern to them.

35. Besides textbooks, students should read a variety of books more often in their spare time.

36. Do you think television has become an essential part of people's daily life?

37. It is estimated that there will be an extreme lack of electricity in many areas in China in the summer next year.

38. Obviously more and more Americans begin/ are beginning to worry about their own safety.

39. It is difficult for the people from Guangzhou to adapt themselves/ be adapted to the climate of the north, especially in winter.

40. The wrinkles in the face of the grey-haired old man shows that he has suffered a lot in his life.

1. It is a wonderful idea to build a transportation center under the People's Square.

2. We can't think of respecting teachers only on Teachers' Day.

3. The people whom he admires are not singers or actors but the scientists who are devoted to science.

4. Only when he became an adult did he really realize his father's love for him.

5. Talking of the football of China, most of the football fans love and hate it.

6. It is impossible for a person not to make any mistakes, but he should make as few mistakes as possible.

7. He thinks (that) the people who bring happiness to the others are the happiest ones in the world.

8. To my amazement, nearly everybody in the areas of Northern Europe can speak one or two foreign languages.

9. Every time he hears this song, almost everything in his hometown will occur to him.

10. You won't find something important until you have lost it.

11. The Chinese government has decided to provide medicines free to those who are suffering from AIDS.

12. Anyone who (has) produced such harmful products as milk powder of poor quality must be punished by law.

13. I doubt whether on earth there is any medicine that makes people clever in the world.

14. It is hard to estimate how long the Iraq War will last.

15. That the prices of oil went up/ rose rapidly has greatly affected the world economy.

16. Do you find/ think it sensible for young people to borrow money to buy cars?

17. I admire the disabled athletes who (have) won honour for our country.

18. As long as terrorism exists, there will be no peace in the world.

19. To my great anger, some bosses often make the workers from the countryside work day and night.

20. Who will do physical work from now on if everybody wants to be a white-collar worker?

篇二:雅思翻译句子

翻译71:在一个消费社会里,人们不再满足生活必需品(bare necessities)。

错误的句子 :in a throw-away society, people are not satisfied with bare necessities any more.

错误1:throw-away society 这个词伙不对。

错误2:not … any more 一般是形容量的东西,而no longer强调动作的持续。

正确的句子:in the consumer society, people are no longer satisfied with bare necessities.

翻译72:电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化。

错误的句子 :The impact on people's cultural level from computer, varies between ages. 错误1:cultural level 表达不对。

错误2:varies between ages表达不对。

错误3:the impact from the computer表达不对。

正确的句子:The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages.

句子结构:主语(impact)+不及物动词 (varies);“of computers on literacy skills”都是定语

拓展的句子(使用并列句): The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages and teachers have mixed feelings on the usage of computers.

中文翻译:电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化,老师对电脑的用法有复杂的感情。

翻译73: 媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众。

错误的句子 :Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 错误1:Media本身就是复数。

错误2:hurt 是动词,OF前后要加名词。

错误3:attentions不可数名词。

正确的句子:The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering.

句子结构:主语(the media)+及物动词 (attracts)+宾语 (attention);“by+ …”方式状语

拓展的句子:The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to the public.

错误1: while是从属连词,后面不能直接加动词原形。

错误2 ignore和bring两个动词。

错误3 them指代不清楚

正确的句子:The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public. 中文翻译:媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众,而忽视对这些观众的有害结果,比如将他们在公众面前曝光。

翻译74:人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果。

错误的句子 :Unhealthy lifestyle is the result of trend to rely on science and technology. 错误1:Unhealthy lifestyle 是可数名词,需要加冠词

错误2:“trend toward doing something”还有“tendency to do something”

正确的句子:People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology.

句子结构:

主语(unhealthy lifestyle)+系动词(is)+表语 (the result); “of…”全是定语

拓展的句子:People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, because this makes their lives more convenience.

错误1:convenience是名词

错误2:because引导的原因状语从句不清晰,到底是解释unhealthy lifestyle,还是解释rely heavily on technology?

正确的句子:People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, despite the fact that technology has made their lives convenient and improved their lives significantly.

中文翻译:人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果,尽管事实上科技让他们的生活更加方便,给他们的生活带来很大提高。

翻译75:贫穷是社区犯罪上升的原因。

错误的句子 :The reason which cause increasely number of community crimes in society is poverty.

错误1:reason which cause, 从句的主谓不一致,而且搭配不好

错误2:increasely number副词不能修饰名词

错误3:这个学生硬是把简单的事情罗嗦地说出来,很别扭。雅思考试考的是语言的通顺和地道,而不是考你的句子是否够复杂。

正确的句子: Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities.

句子结构:主语(poverty)+系动词 (is)+表语(responsible)

拓展的句子: Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, that means people's traveling will become more convenience and safety.

错误 1: 一般来说是 this means that

错误 2:become 是系动词,后面加形容词去修饰主语。

错误 3:safety 和前面 low –cost carriers 没什么联系。

正确的句子:Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an

astounding pace over the past decades, and this means that people are tempted to travel more frequently than before.

中文翻译:因为费用的下降,航空最近几十年发展得很快,这意味着人们会比以前更多旅游。

翻译76:因为费用的下降,航空最近几十年发展得很快。

错误的句子 :The airline has sharp development in recent decades, with the cost decline. 错误1:in recent decades一般要用现在完成时态,这句话没有

错误2:“has sharp development”表达比较别扭

错误3:with是个介词,后面不能加句子

正确的句子:Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades.

句子结构:

主语(the aviation industry)+不及物动词(developed); “Because of low-cost carriers” 原因状语;“over the past decades”时间状语; “at an astounding pace”程度状语

翻译77:非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡,生物多样性也会损失。

错误的句子 :Hunting illegally leads to the extinct of species, as well as, biodiversity is deteriorated.

错误1:extinct是个形容词

错误2:as well as 后面一般加名词,动名词,或者是比较状语从句的分句,很少加完整的句子。

正确的句子:Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity. 主语(Illegal hunting)+及物动词(leads to)+宾语(extinction)

翻译78:动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用。

错误的句子 :Animal experiment is occasionally unable to examine drugs side effects. 错误1:Animal experiment 可数名词,要加负数

错误2:occasionally意思是“偶尔地,极少地”

错误3:drugs side effects 没有使用所有格

正确的句子:Animal experiments fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs.

翻译79:电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分。

错误的句子:The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment.

错误1:一般是“part of”

错误2:“effort to do something”更为通顺,在这里

正确的句子:The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the

句子结构:

主语(The invention of electric vehicles)+系动词(is)+表语 (part ); “of…”全是定语

拓展的句子:The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the

environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors

错误1:electric vehicles重复

错误2:conduct exhaust emission搭配问题

错误3:fossil fuel motors用词不好,MOTOR是马达的意思。

正确的句子:The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the

environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars. 中文翻译:电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分,因为这些汽车比传统汽车产生较少的废气。

翻译80:有时候,很难去评估人类行为的环境代价。

错误的句子:Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental costs of people’s behaviors.

错误1:environmental cost在这里用单数就好,因为是在说整个影响,而不是不同的影响。

错误2:behaviour 英式拼写

错误3:behaviour在这里不用activities好,因为行为是指人的瞬间举动,activities一般是持续时间比较长。

正确的句子:Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities.

句子结构:

主语(it)+ 系动词(is)+表语 (difficult);而“to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities”不定式充当形式主语。

拓展的句子:Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, there is a necessity for the government enacting legislations to restrict some behaviors , which can also arise people's concern about environmental degradation. 错误1:there is a necessity for 别扭

错误2:arise 不及物动词

错误3:状语从句后,再写那么长的定语从句就多余了

正确的句子:Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, it is necessary to enact laws to restrict some behaviours.

中文翻译:有时候,虽然很难去评估人类行为的环境代价,但是应该颁布法律以限制这些行为。

翻译81:人口老龄化促使国家去放松退休年龄的限制。

错误的句子:Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban.

错误1:retirement age是可数名词

错误2:reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好

正确的句子:the ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

句子结构:主语(ageing population)+及物动词(prompt)+宾语(countries)+宾语补足语(to raise…)

拓展的句子:The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

错误:应该是skilled workers. Skillful表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟

正确的句子:The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.

注:a problem在这里是同位语,指代前面的shortage

中文翻译:人口老龄化导致高级技术工人的短缺,这个问题已经促使国家提高了法定退休年龄。

翻译82:学校应该允许老师强制捣蛋的小孩离开教室。

错误的句子:Schools should allow teachers to make the children with disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms.

错误:children with disruptive behaviours 略显罗嗦

正确的句子:Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.

原句:Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.

句子结构:主语(schools)+及物动词(permit)+宾语(teachers)+宾语补足语 (to use force…)

翻译83: 很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚。

错误的句子:Many people think that they are necessary to chaes after fashion.

错误:人没有necessary这么一说; chase在这里用作及物动词比较好。

正确的句子:Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.

句子结构:主语(many people)+及物动词(consider)+形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语 (necessary); 真正的宾语是to follow fashion.

篇三:该怎样翻译英语句子

一,直译(直接翻译): 这种翻译方法就是力求把每个单词都翻译出来,然后把每个单词的汉语意思再连起来,这样就组成了整个句子的翻译。 例:My name is Lucy. 每个单词的意思:My(我的); name(名字); is(是); Lucy(露西)。 所以,My name is Lucy. 翻译成:我的名字是露西。

二,翻译出大部分单词的意思: 直接看例子:Do you like English ? 每个单词的意思:Do(助动词) ;you(你) ;like(喜欢); English(英语) 所以, Do you like English ? 翻译成:你喜欢英语吗? 在这个句子中,我们发现Do这个单词似乎翻译成什么都不合适,在这个句子中Do是一个助动词,助动词是帮助其他动词构成疑问句或者否定句,它本身并没有什么意思,所以以后我们在翻译的时候,不要觉得有些单词没有翻译出来就是错的。我们常见的一些不需要翻译出来的词包括,助动词do或者does,定冠词the等等。

三,简略翻译: 有些句子看似很长,但是翻译的时候我们只需要根据前文的意思简单的翻译一下就可以了。 例:What's your favorite subject? 你最喜欢的学科是什么? 翻译:My favorite subject is English. 每个单词的意思是:My(我的);favorite(最喜欢的);subject(学

科);is(是);English(英语)。 翻译的'时候我们可以根据前面的问句把句子My favorite subject is English直接翻译成:英语。(它所表达的意思就是:我最喜欢的学科是英语)

我们在翻译的时候,要根据具体情况选用不同的翻译方法,要把句子翻译学活,不要死板。 当然了,还有其他的翻译方法,在这个地方我们简单的列举了几种,希望对大家有所帮助。

篇四:优美的英文句子 带翻译

如果只是遇见,不能停留,不如不遇见。

If we can only encounter each other rather than stay with each other,then I wish we had never encountered.

2。宁愿笑着流泪,也不哭着说后悔。心碎了,还需再补吗?

I would like weeping with the smile rather than repenting with the cry, when my heart is broken, is it needed to fix?

3。没有谁对不起谁,只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。

No one indebted for others, while many people don't know how to cherish others.

4。命里有时钟需有 命里无时莫强求

You will have it if it belongs to you, whereas you don't kvetch for it if it doesn't appear in your life.

5。当香烟爱上火柴时,就注定受到伤害

When a cigarette falls in love with a match, it is destined to be hurt.

6。爱情…在指缝间承诺 指缝…。在爱情下交缠。

Love ,promised between the fingers

Finger rift, twisted in the love

7。没有人值得你 流泪,值得让你这么做的人不会让你哭泣。

No man or woman is worth your tears, and the one who is, won?t make you cry.

8。记住该记住的,忘记该忘记的。改变能改变的,接受不能改变的。

Remember what should be remembered, and forget what should be forgotten. Alter what is changeable, and accept what is unchangeable.

Love is like a butterfly. It goes where it pleases and it pleases where it goes. 爱情就像一只蝴蝶,它喜欢飞到哪里,就把欢乐带到哪里。

If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden.

假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花,那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。 Within you I lose myself, without you I find myself wanting to be lost again.

有了你,我迷失了自我。失去你,我多么希望自己再度迷失。

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet.

每一个沐浴在爱河中的人都是诗人。

Look into my eyes - you will see what you mean to me.

看看我的眼睛,你会发现你对我而言意味着什么。

Distance makes the hearts grow fonder.

距离使两颗心靠得更近。

I need him like I need the air to breathe.

我需要他,正如我需要呼吸空气。

If equal affection cannot be, let the more loving be me.

如果没有相等的爱,那就让我爱多一些吧。

Love is a vine that grows into our hearts.

爱是长在我们心里的藤蔓。

If I know what love is, it is because of you.

因为你,我懂得了爱。

Love is the greatest refreshment in life.

爱情是生活最好的提神剂。

Love never dies.

爱情永不死。

The darkness is no darkness with thee.

有了你,黑暗不再是黑暗。

We cease loving ourselves if no one loves us.

如果没有人爱我们,我们也就不会再爱自己了。

There is no remedy for love but to love more.

治疗爱的创伤唯有加倍地去爱。

When love is not madness, it is not love.

如果爱不疯狂就不是爱了。

A heart that loves is always young.

有爱的心永远年轻。

Love is blind.

爱情是盲目的。

1.A bad workman always blames his tools. 拙匠总怪工具差。

2.A contented mind is a perpetual feast. 知足长乐。

3.A good beginning is half the battle. 好的开端等于成功一半。

4.A little pot is soon hot. 壶小易热,量小易怒。

5.All lay loads on a willing horse. 好马重负。

6.A merry heart goes all the way. 心情愉快,万事顺利 。

7.Bad excuses are worse than none. 狡辩比不辩护还糟 。

8.Character is the first and last word in the success circle.

人的品格是事业成功的先决条件。

9.Cleanliness is next to godliness. 整洁近于美德 。

10.Courtesy costs nothing. 彬彬有礼,惠而不费 。

11.Doing nothing is doing ill. 无所事事,必干坏事。

12.Early to bed, early to rise, make a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.睡得早,起得早,聪明、富裕、身体好 。

13.Empty vessels make the most noise. 满瓶子不响,半瓶子晃荡 。

14.Every man hath his weak side. 人皆有弱点 。

15.Everything ought to be beautiful in a human being: face, dress, soul and idea. 人的一切都应当是美丽的:容貌、衣着、心灵和思想。

16.Extremes are dangerous. 凡事走向极端是危险的 。

17.Good advice is harsh to the ear. 忠言逆耳 。

18.Grasp all, lose all. 欲尽得,必尽失 。

19.Great hopes make great men. 伟大的理想造就伟大的人物。

20.Handsome is he who does handsomely. 行为美者才真美。

21.Have but few friends, though many acquaintances. 结交可广,知己宜少。

22.Hear all parties.兼听则明,偏听则暗 。

23.He is a wise man who speaks little. 智者寡言。

24.He is not laughed at that laughs at himself first.有自知之明者被人尊敬。

25.He is rich enough that wants nothing.无欲者最富有,贪欲者最贫穷。

26.He is truly happy who makes others happy.使他人幸福的人,是真正的幸福。

27.Honesty is the best policy. 诚实乃上策。

28.Hope for the best and prepare for the worst.?? 抱最好的希望,作最坏的准备 。

29.Idleness is the root of all evil. 懒惰是万恶之源 。

30.If we dream, everything is possible. 敢于梦想,一切都将成为可能。

31.Kind hearts are the gardens, kind thoughts are the roots, kind words are flowers and kind deeds are the fruits.仁慈的心田是花园,崇高的思想是根茎,友善的言语是花朵,良好的行为是果实。

32.Laugh, and the world laughs with you; Weep, and you weep lone.欢笑,整个世界伴你欢笑。哭泣,只有你独自向隅而泣 。

33.Life is measured by thought and action not by time.衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为,而不是时间。

34.Life is not all beer and skittles. 人生并非尽是乐事 。

35.Long absent, soon forgotten. 别久情疏 。

36.Look before you leap. 三思而后行 。

37.Lookers-on see most of the game. 旁观者清,当局者迷。

38.Manners make the man.观其待人而知其人 。

39.Misfortune tests the sincerity of friends. 患难识知交。

40.No cross, no crown.没有苦难,就没有快乐 。

41.Nobody's enemy but his own. 自寻苦恼 。

42.One man's fault is another man's lesson. 前车之覆,后车之鉴 。

43.Pardon all men, but never thyself. 严以律已,宽以待人。

44.Reason is the guide and light of life. 理智是人生的灯塔 。

45.Sadness and gladness succeed one another. 乐极生悲,苦尽甘来 。

46.Still waters run deep.流静水深,人静心深 。

47.The fire is the test of gold; adversity of strong men. 烈火炼真金,逆境炼壮士 。

48.The fox may grow grey, but never good. 江山易改,本性难移 。

49.The more a man learns, the more he sees his ignorance. 知识越广博,越感已无知 。

50.Virtue is a jewel of great price. 美德是无价之宝 。

51.Weak things united become strong. 一根筷子易折断,十根筷子硬如铁 。

52.We can't judge a person by what he says but by what he does.判断一个人,不听言语看行动 。

53.Where there is a will there is a way. 有志者,事竟成 。

54.Will is power. 意志就是力量 。

55.Wise men are silent; fools talk. 智者沉默寡言,愚者滔滔不绝 。

56.Wise men learn by others' harm, fools by their own.智者以他人挫折为鉴,愚者必自身碰壁方知觉。

1. 记住该记住的,忘记该忘记的。改变能改变的,接受不能改变的。

Remember what should be remembered, and forget what should be forgotten. Alter what is changeable, and accept what is mutable.

2.鱼对水说你看不到我的眼泪,因为我在水里。水说我能感觉到你的眼泪,因为你在我心里。

“You couldn?t see my tears cause I am in the water.” Fish said to water.

“But I could feel your tears cause you are in my heart.” Answered water.

3.人生短短几十年,不要给自己留下了什么遗憾,想笑就笑,想哭就哭,该爱的时候就去爱,无谓压抑自己。

Your life only lasts for a few decades, so be sure that you don't leave any regrets. Laugh or cry as you like, and it?s meaningless to oppress yourself.

4. 生命中,不断地有人进入或离开。于是,看见的,看不见了;记住的,遗忘了。生命中,不断地有得到和失落。于是,看不见的,看见了;遗忘的,记住了。然而,看不见的,是不是就等于不存在?记住的,是不是永远不会消失? There is someone that is coming or passing away in your life around the clock, so you

篇五:初中英语句子翻译精选

根据所给中文完成句子翻译。

1.下次你应该早点儿来这儿。 .

2.你最好不要单独去游泳。 .

3.让我们开始讨论这个难题吧。 .

4.这箱子太重,这小孩搬不动。 .

5.每天我父亲去上班需要一个半小时。 .

6.瞧!树下有一位老人正在观看孩子们玩游戏。 .

7.我感到这个问题很难回答。 .

8.虽然他们个子不太高,人也不太强壮,但他们是一支很好的队伍。

9.你的英语学习情况怎样? ?

10.当我们到达火车站时,火车已开走了。 .

11.这位老人已当了30多年英语老师了。 .

12.她脸色显得很焦急,因为***妈已病了些时候了。 13.中华人民共和国成立于1949年10月1日。 .

14.如果你不理解这篇课文,可以请教老师。 .

15.这两种语言有什么差异?

16.为了将来更好地为人民服务,我们学习非常刻苦。 17.据说城里又建造了一所医院。 .

18.据说今天下午开班会, .

19.她宁愿和我们一道去也不愿呆在家里。 .

20.星期天我宁愿看书也不愿玩。 .

21.这颗新星是一位中国科学家发现的。 .

22.他给我们提供了一条有用的信息。 .

23.请立刻给我带两瓶牛奶来吧。 .

24.你们最好不要在大街上踢足球。

25.他已被派到西藏(Tibet)工作去了吗?

26.教育上已取得了很大的成绩。 .

27.不要嘲笑那些遇到麻烦的人。

28.我把窗户关上你不介意吧?

29.做完作业后,他又接着给父母写了一封信。 .

30.他用了三周时间看完了这本书。 .

31.不要躺在床上看电视,这对你的眼睛有害。 .

32.从那以后我不再是个学生了。 .

33.我朋友因唱歌而出了名。 .

34.你吃得越多,长得越胖。

35.他告诉了我,我才知道这件事。 .

36.你能告诉我从上海到北京乘火车需要多长时间吗? ?

37.从北京到上海的单程票价是多少?

38.我不仅会说英语,而且会说法语。

39.他给我们讲了那么多有趣的故事,我们都哈哈大笑。40.那城市的变化使他们感到惊奇。

41.他们对你们的工作评价很高。

42.如今,人们彼此间仍旧做着相同的事。 .

43.使我吃惊的是,最后他考试及格了。 44.我已经提醒他要提防这个人。 .

45.球迷们(fan)正忙于看“世界杯”。 .

46.老师要求我们保持教室内的清洁和安静。 .

47.孩子们最好不要过多地玩电脑游戏。 .

48.我们坚信中国明天会更美好。 .

49.必须采取措施防止这类事故再次发生。

50.这座山没有你想像得那么危险。

51.从今以后,你必须更加小心。 .

52.我想这是我读过的最好的小说(novel)之一。 .

53.虽然他已不在人世,但他的精神还继续存在。

54.他关心别人胜过关心自己。 .

55.他们努力地干,以便尽快完成这项工作。 .

56.当你离开的时候,务必关掉所有的机器。 .

57.那座山上终年积雪。 .

58.我听说三分之二的工作已完成了。 .

59.他不知道***妈为什么生他的气。 .

60.我叔叔以前是个司机,而现在他是医生。

61.别着急,迟早你会找到你的自行车的。 .

62.他以能在一小时内完成这么艰巨的工作而自豪。

63.到目前为止,工人们已在这条河上建了三座桥了。 64.这种杯子是用来喝酒的。

65.恐龙生活在地球上距今已有l亿5干多万年了。

66.英语在世界上被用做一种有用的工作语言。 67.大多数水稻都生长在南方。

68.许多国家已向太空发射了人造卫星。

69.你能告诉我他现在住在哪儿吗?

70.他不仅会说英语还会说法语。.

71.展出的小汽车都是中国制造的。 .

72.我希望你能与同学们和睦相处。

73.雨这么大,我只好等到雨停以后再走。 .

74.无论他说什么,我都不相信他。

75.我妈妈每天花一小时打扫卫生。

76.全世界的人都知道长城。 .

77.他说他已拍了许多照片。 .

78.我父亲过去是个篮球队员。但现在是教练。

79.张老师常常当众赞扬他的儿子。

80.请你教我怎样上网查询,好吗?

81.我认为这项工作不可能在两天内完成。

82.她父母叫她晚上不要单独外出。 .

83.我宁愿买一台新电脑,而不愿买一台二手货。84.校长对我们英语老师评价很高。 .

85.老人理应受到尊重。 .

86.我到收款台checkout时,才意识到我把钱包忘在家里了。 .

87.张老师告诉我们考试时别紧张。

88.是否要下雨,我说不准。

89.无论多么困难,我都不会放弃。

根据所给中文完成句子翻译。

1. Next time you should come here earlier. 2. You'd better not go swimming alone.

3. Let's discuss the difficult problem now. 4. The box is too heavy for the boy to carry.

5. Every day it takes my father one and a half hours ( one hour and a half) to go to work.

6. Look! There is an old man under the tree watching the children playing games.

7. I found it very difficult to answer the question.

8. Though they were neither very tall nor very strong, they were a good team.

9. How are you getting along (on) with your English study?

10. The train had left when we got to the railway station.

11. The old man has been an English teacher for more than thirty years.

12. She looks worried because her mother has been ill for some time.

13. The People's Republic of China was founded on Oct 1st, 1949.

14. If you can't understand the text, you may ask your teacher for help.

15. What's the difference between these two languages?

16. We work hard at our study so that we can serve the people in the future.

17. It is said that another hospital has been built in the city

18. It is said that there will be a class meeting this afternoon, but you'd better make sure

19. She preferred to go with us rather than stay at home

20. On Sundays I prefer reading to playing

21. The new star was discovered by a Chinese scientist

22. He gave us a useful piece of information

23. Please bring me two bottles of milk at once

24. You'd better not play football in the street .

25. Has he been sent to work in Tibet?

26. Great changes have been made in education.

27. Don't laugh at those who are in trouble.

28. Would you mind if I shut the window?

29. After he finished his homework, he went on to write to his parents

30. It took him three weeks to finish reading the book

31.. Don't watch TV in bed.It's bad for your eyes

32. After that I was no longer a student

33. My friend is famous for his singing

34. The more you eat, the fatter you will be.

35. I knew nothing about it until he told me

36. Could you tell me how long it takes by train from Shanghai to Beijing

37. What's the price of a one-way ticket from Beijing to Shanghai?

38. I can speak not only English but also French as well .

39. He told us such funny stories that we all laughed

40. They were amazed at the changes in that city.

41. They thought highly of your work

42. Today people still do the same thing to each other

43. To my surprise, he passed the exam at last.

44. I've warned him about the man.

45. Football fans are busy watching the World Cup

46. We are asked to keep our classroom clean and quiet by the teacher

47. Children had better not play computer games too much

48. We are sure that China will be even better tomorrow

49. Something must be done to stop this kind of accident from happening again.

50. The mountain is less dangerous than you think.

51. You must be more careful from now on.

52. I think this novel is one of the best I've read

53. Even though he is no longer alive, his spirit lives on.

54. He thinks more of others than himself

55. They worked hard so that they could finish the work soon

56. Make sure all the machines are (must be) shut down when you leave

57. The mountain is covered with snow all year round

58. I heard that t wo-thirds of the work has been finished

59. He didn't know why his mother was angry with him

60. My uncle used to be a driver,but now he is a doctor.

61. Don't worry.You will find your bike sooner or later

62. He is proud of finishing such hard work in an hour.

63. The workers have built three bridges over the river so far.

64. This kind of cup is used for drinking wine

65. Dinosaurs lived on the earth for more than 150 million years.

66. English is used as a useful working language in the world.

67. Most of rice is grown in the south.

68. Man-made satellites have been set up into space by many countries.

69. Can you tell me where he is living now ?

70. He can speak not only English but also French

71. The cars on show are made in China

72. I hope that you can get on well with your classmates

73. It is raining heavily.I have to stay here until it stops

74. No matter what he says,I don't believe him.

75. It takes my mother an hour to do the cleaning every day.

76. The Great Wall is known by the people all over the world

77. He said that he had taken many photos

78. My father used to be a basketball player, but now he's a coach.

79. Mr Zhang often speaks highly of his son in public.

80. Could/Would you please teach me how to search the Internet?

81. I don't think the work can be done in two days.

82. Her parents told him not to go out alone at night

83. I prefer/preferred to buy a new computer rather than buy a used one.

84. The headteacher speaks/spoke highly of our English teacher

85. Old people deserve to be respected

86. When I got to the checkout.I realized (that) I had left my wallet/purse at home

87. Mrs Zhang tells/told us not to be nervous in the exam.

88. I am not sure whether/if it is going to rain.

英语作文写作技巧1

书面表达是近几年初中英语中考的重要题型,是一种反映学生表达、传递信息和解决实际问题的重要的语言测试手段,同时也是用于测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识活用能力的一项综合性试题。《英语课程标准》对各个年级学生“写”的技能提出了明确目标,它要求学生具有较高的书面语言表达能力。然而,目前初中英语教学的书面表达相对滞后,学生的写作水平提高甚微,一提起写作学生们就犯愁,甚至一字不写,有的干脆放弃。写一篇像样的英语作文对80%的学生来说是“难于上青天”。究其原因是多方面的。学生方面:

(1)汉语影响、生词造句;

(2)词汇贫乏、搭配不当;

(3)句型误用、语法不通;

(4)信息不全、条理紊乱。因此,笔者结合新教材的内容,在教学中探索了学生写作训练的方法。

一、积累词汇

初中学生在阅读理解方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear,crowded/uncrowded,polite/impolite/rude。词形相似的词except/expect,chance/change/challenge。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。

二、活用词句

当学生有了一定的词汇量的时候,教师在教学中可以采用先易后难的方法,让学生用简单的词组成句子,再以句子的构成作为学生进行写作训练的起点,引导学生从对单个句型的掌握,逐渐过渡到多种句型的混用,直到学生能连贯自如地表达思想。一句多译,句型转换,是书面表达能力的关键。总的来说,教师在平时的教学中要将日常生活中经常出现的词、句作为材料让学生训练,使学生乐于接受,轻松完成,享受成功感。

例如:以study为中心组成句子。

I study in No.3 Middle School。I study very hard。My sister studies in the same school。But she studies harder than me。等等。

三、创设情景

例如,学生举行运动会,开“生日聚会”,以“A sports meeting”和“My birthday party”为语境,让学生在活动中仔细观察,亲身体验,然后试着用自己所学的语言知识,表达“A sports meeting”和“My birthday party”这些话题。在我们新教材的每个单元中,都设有写作训练题,它们用英语设置语境,用英语提示内容,这些写的练习,与我们平时用汉语给语境、用英语完成段落的方式相比,更为理想。当然,教师在设立语境话题时要与学生的水平和能力相适应,应从简到难,从浅到深进行。否则,学生会无从下笔,久而久之,他们会失去信心。

四、注重听、说和阅读的培养

在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。

比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前演讲”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的`效果。

五、写英文日记

要养成记英语日记勤练笔的习惯。经常用英语记日记等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语写作行之有效的好办法。在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。对一些所给情景写的文章,写好后要对照一些范文,找出差距,然后再去练习,不仅能促使学生及时巩固所学的知识,还能锻炼他们的恒心和学习毅力,同时对提高英语作文也是很有帮助的。只有这样,学生才能通过多练习提高英语写作水平。

总之,学生英语写作水平的提高不是一朝一夕的事,英语写作能力培养的训练方法也是多方面的,因此需要我们英语教师在教学工作中不断探索、不断研究,总结出一些更富有创新活力的英语写作方法。鼓励学生平时要多积累语素材,要求他们坚持长期写作训练,做到善于思考、勤于训练、勇于探究,充分发挥学生的潜力。久而久之,学生的写作水平就会有大幅度的提高。

英语作文写作技巧2

一、审题立意

大学英语六级作文的题型一般是标题作文、主题句作文或情景、图表作文等等,去年六级作文考试有书信和记叙文,但基本都属于命题作文范畴,英语六级写作技巧。对于命题作文,审题立意是写好作文至关重要的一步。所谓审题,就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想和主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料。也就是通过分析作文题给出的标题、主题旬或情景,找出关键词或中心词,明确写作要求,是写哪方面的内容,既包括题材上的要求,也包括体裁上的要求。如果不审题就随便下笔,想一句写一句,内容离题,即使再好的再华丽的再精心构思的词句表达也无济于事。另一方面,六级写作的目的是测试学生用英语书面表达思想的初步能力,并不是测试你母语创作能力,而且为了便于作文评卷有一尽量统一的标准,出题方式无论怎样变化,六级作文都可以归纳为三段式,有的甚至给出三段的段首句。其目的就是让学生们在统一主题下的写作要点、思维和方式尽可能地同一化和统一化。鉴于此,我们应清楚六级写作没有太大的自由发挥空间。在构思段落之前一定要仔细斟酌标题、主题句和段首字,找出关键词从而确定写作的方向和范围,而且还应记住要尽量缩小这个范围,不能脱离要求任意展开,那样属于跑题。

二、段落构思

文章的段落,是文章的基本组成部分,一篇好的文章需要精心的段落构思和合理的段落安排,根据不同的题材确定不同的段落写作顺序。六级作文从结构上看,一般由三部分组成:引言部分(introductory part;展开部分(bodypart);结尾部分(ending part),而且每段往往只有一个主题,段中各支持句围绕明确的主题,层层展开论证并服务于主题句。整篇文章也是层层推进,环环相扣,条理分明,完整统一。下面进一步说明每一部分的具体写作技巧与要求:

引言部分 introductory part

文章开头很重要,关系到全篇文章,一定要认真考虑好如何写好第一句,秘书工作《英语六级写作技巧》。一般紧扣主题,开门见山,直接入题。如果已给出段首句,则要考虑如何跟开头连接好。在实际写作中,主要有以下几种开头方式。

定义法。即用一句话或几句话来解放说明题中的关键词,给出关键词的定义。多用于给出一简单题目的标题作文。直接切入主题。也就是直截了当地揭示文章的主题或写作原由,如已给出每一段的中文提示,可直接翻译提示中每一段的中心思想,作为开头。

提问法。用疑问句或设问句开头,紧接着提出自己对这个问题的看法或直接点明主题,这种方法如果使用得当,能够激起读者往下读的兴趣,以便找出答案。以故事背景开头,交待时间、地点、人物及背景,然后在这个背景下引出正文。这种方法多用于记叙文,使读者一开始就产生鲜明视觉形象。引用法。即引用名人名言或谚语等作为文章的开头,指出阅读的内容范围。

主题部分 body part

篇章写作不仅应层次清楚,而且主次也要分明i任何文章都有主体部分,即文章的精华部分。学生在这部分的写作错误五花八门,或者段落内容缺乏统一性,或者句与句之间缺少连贯性,层次混乱,信息的表达经常是跳跃式的想到什么写什么,内容空洞,言之无物,缺乏严密的逻辑性。针对这些错误,写主体段应注意以下几点要求。要紧扣开头段提出的主题思想,突出中心。围绕主题句用一组意思连贯而且完整的句子展开文章,切记各展开句是能起到说明、支持或阐述主题的句子并服务于主题,全文保持统一性,也就是我们通常所说的“切题”。主体段取材必须精练典型,系统而完整。根据内容需要和字数的规定,确定要点的详与略后,选择正确的、典型的、具有说服力的事实、例子、数据和论据等说明解释并扩充主题。主体段要与开头段和结尾段有内在的必然归宿,要顺其自然地过渡,使用好承上启下的连接词或句子,防止突然转折。另外,主体段的句与句之间也要逐步展开,通顺连贯,符合一定的逻辑关系。

结尾部分 ending part

文章如何结尾关系到写作的成败。好的结尾不仅在形式上起到面龙点睛的效果,而且在内容上读者明其宗旨,解其寓意。一般结尾段的写法有以下几种;总结式,即在上文所述事实和论据的基础上,对全文进行归纳、总结得出结论,使读者对文章的主题或作者的观点有个更完整而清晰的理解。首尾呼应式,即对引言段所提出的同题给出解决方案,作到首尾呼应,主题突出,结构匀称,使读者对提出的问题有了明确的答案。提问式,这种结尾形式可以引起读者的思考。并起到强调主题的作用。展望式,也就是要提出作者的希望、号召或表示信心和决心,使读者受鼓舞。引语式,引用名人名言,谚语俗语做文章的结尾,使文章更具说服力。