写作文要开门见山地表达自己的观点
Issue1
"Wecanusuallylearnmuchmorefrompeoplewhoseviewswesharethanfrompeoplewhoseviewscontradictourown.disagreementcancausestressandinhibitlearning。"
Dowelearnmorefrompeoplewhoseideasweshareincommonthanfromthosewhoseideascontradictours?Thespeakerclaimsso，forthereasonthatdisagreementcancausestressandinhibitlearning.Iconcedethatunduediscordcanimpedelearning.Otherwise,inmyviewwelearnfarmorefromdiscourseanddebatewiththosewhoseideasweopposethanfrompeoplewhoseideasareinaccordwithourown.
在第一段，作者开门见山地表达自己的观点——conditionallydisagree。这一点值得大家借鉴。但由于写的仓促，依然有措辞的`失误。
Admittedly，undersomecircumstancesdisagreementwithotherscanbecounterproductivetolearning。Forsupportingexamplesoneneedlooknofurtherthanatelevisionset。Ontoday‘stypicaltelevisionorradiotalkshow，disagreementusuallymanifestsitselfinmeaninglessrhetoricalboutsandshoutingmatches，duringwhichopponentsvietohavetheirownmessageheard，buthavelittleinteresteitherinfindingcommongroundwithorinacknowledgingthemeritsoftheopponent‘sviewpoint。Understandably，neitherthecombatantsnortheviewerslearnanythingmeaningful。Infact，thesebattlesonlyservetoreinforcethepredispositionsandbiasesofallconcerned。Theendresultisthatlearningisimpeded。
在这第二段，作者作出某种程度的让步，注意Admittedly，……的用法，既省事有明了，是greAWA的典型用法。我们还可以发掘到作者用了比较多essay的常用词组，如，looknofurtherthansth。Manifestitself，havelittleinteresteitherin…orin…，findcommongroundwith，inacknowledgesth.onlyserveto…这些用词均能让人倍感专业水平。
Disagreementcanalsoinhibitlearningwhentwoopponentsdisagreeonfundamentalassumptionsneededformeaningfuldiscourseanddebate。Forexample，astudentofpaleontologylearnslittleabouttheevolutionofananimalspeciesundercurrentstudybydebatingwithanindividualwhosereligiousbeliefsystemprecludesthepossibilityofevolutiontobeginwith。And，economicsandfinancestudentslearnlittleaboutthedynamicsofalaissez-fairesystembydebatingwithasocialistwhoseviewisthatacentralizedpowershouldcontrolalleconomicactivity。
Issue2
继续举例，让观点丰满起来，这一点值得借鉴。问题是大家要注意他举的例子挺有说服力的。
Asidefromtheforegoingtwoprovisos，however,Ifundamentallydisagreewiththespeaker‘sclaim.Assumingcommongroundbetweentworationalandreasonableopponentswillingtodebateonintellectualmerits，bothopponentsstandtogainmuchfromthatdebate。Indeeditisprimarilythroughsuchdebatethathumanknowledgeadvances，whetheratthepersonal，community，orgloballevel。
从此段开始展开第一段的观点。要学习的是一些句型：Asidefromtheforegoingtwoprovisos，…however,Ifundamentallydisagreewith…;Indeeditisprimarilythrough…that…
Atthepersonallevel，bylisteningtotheirparents‘rationalefortheirseeminglyoppressiverulesandpoliciesteenagerscanlearnhowcertainbehaviorsnaturallycarrycertainundesirableconsequences。Atthesametime，bylisteningtotheirteenagersconcernsaboutautonomyandaboutpeerpressuresparentscanlearnthevaluablelessonthateffectiveparentingandcontrolaretwodifferentthings。Atthecommunitylevel，throughdispassionatedialogueanenvironmentalactivistcancometounderstandthelegitimateeconomicconcernsofthosewhosejobsdependonthecontinuedprofitableoperationofafactory。Conversely，thelattermightstandtolearnmuchaboutthepotentialpublichealthpricetobepaidbyensuringjobgrowthandalowunemploymentrate。Finally，atthegloballevel，twonationswithopposingpoliticaloreconomicinterestscanreachmutuallybeneficialagreementsbystrivingtounderstandtheother‘slegitimateconcernsforitsnationalsecurity，itspoliticalsovereignty，the3stabilityofitseconomyandcurrency，andsoforth。
此段可谓重点段，所以作者花了重墨称述观点，分别从3个层次论述了disagreement的好处。注意它好就好在能从personal，community，globallevels较全面地论述，这是最讨ets欢心的哦!而且他用了比较多的复扎句，也是拿分的重头戏。
Insum,unlesstwoopponentsinadebateareeachwillingtoplayonthesamefieldandbythesamerules,Iconcedethatdisagreementcanimpedelearning.Otherwise,reasoneddiscourseanddebatebetweenpeoplewithopposingviewpointsistheveryfoundationuponwhichhumanknowledgeadvances.Accordingly,onbalancethespeakerisfundamentallycorrect.收尾了!Insum…Unless…,Iconcedethat…Otherwise…uponwhich…
Accordingly…fundamentallycorrect.结尾虽仓促，但在如此短的时间内写成这样，算不错啦!起码4.5分!!!
